this is really clean and smooth i like it, the whole song is very coherent as a whole while still being interesting by adding something slightly new to each part making each section unique, like the vocal samples around 1:00 and the lead from 1:43 (fire)

how does noone know about u

omg u did such a good job executing this lofi calm vibe

first off the intro is GODLY like the way the song gradually goes from spontaneous chopping of the guitar to gradually gaining rhythm with the drums and synth is done so well

the background ambience and percussion throughout the song is solid, but the main thing i dont like about the song is how some of the instruments are obtrusive and stick out, especially this one synth starting from 0:57 thats also a little bit too high-pitched too
id say the obtrusive issue is a little bit of a problem with the piano used in the last section as well. i think the section itself could be fine alone, but the staticky, choppy feel of the first half contrasts the clarity and straightforward sound of the piano. idk if that makes sense sorry im not that good at explaining

other than that i love the vibe of this song, oh and the outro is pretty nice too
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wow this is really solid, the drops are really strong and powerful and the song is structured reallly well

i would say maybe you could tame the volume a bit of some things and maybe just the master in general because some parts feel a bit loud for me, it might be causing a bit of muddiness too

i think the song could transition better into the change in key out of the second drop at 1:44 since it is kind of sudden

one last thing, it sounds like the vocal sample you used in 1:56-2:22 is causing a bit of dissonance, idk if that was intentional or not but either way it seems awkward to use for me

other than those small things yea this is overall good, gg